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Tuesday 6 November 2012

Guy Fawkes Description

Today we did buddy writing with Room 8. We wrote a description about a guy fawkes scene. My buddy writing was Arapeta. 




As the sun goes down and the moon becomes visible the explosions start!
Laughter comes to children when colorful fireworks explode into ash.
Fireworks exploding into rainbows of joy through the sky.
Massive shivers drift through our bodies from effect of the fireworks.
As we watch, the corner of our eyes catch a big glance of light.
On the other corner of our eyes we see We hear the big noises echoing off the moon.
The sound effects make beyonces concerts sound little.
Motivation rises and rises until the fireworks blowout.

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